Reviewer: EliteWarrior
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Date: Dec 22, 2004 7:44 PM
Title: Aryll's Story
Now THIS is a little better. But, most of it is just a big copy of your last story, just changed halfway. It'd be better if you just added this as a chapter to your other story.
Plus, apart from the little story mixup (The Hero of Time was an only child, the Hero of the Winds is the guy with the sis), this story is well written. Nicely done.
Author's Response: well, I'm well aware of that, I just thought it'd be a bit better to give Link a little sister in there, ya know? Plus, it makes things a bit more original. Thanks for the comments, though...