AAAAHH!!!!!!! You are...my Master. FINALLY, someone other than me actually tries to stick to the setting and storyline of Zelda, Medieval Europe. Really, I was getting sick of people making Zelda characters sound as if they just came outta the loop in Detroit. That's not what Dark Age people talked like, people! But, back to your story, it is amazing. Although you haven't gotten to the main storyline yet, I enjoyed reading the first chapters, and love your choice of dialogue (As prescribed above). Purely amazing, and it sounds as if J. R. Tolkien himself wrote it.