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Reviews For The Sea Spirit
Reviewer: serenitythefaierikin Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 25, 2005 12:26 AM Title: Ch 7

Holy cow!!! This story is CAPTIVATING!!! I love it, and can't wait to read more!! You have me on the edge of my seat!! Fantastic job!!

Reviewer: (the 2nd Burn)Burn Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2005 10:18 AM Title: Ch 1

umm....someone deleted your comment....I tink....I dunno.

Reviewer: (The real not my idiotic bro) Horny Hornet Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2005 10:17 AM Title: Ch 1

umm........what?

Reviewer: Ademi Princess Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2005 10:13 AM Title: Ch 1

..........my mistake.*blush*

Reviewer: Burn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 16, 2005 7:57 PM Title: Ch 1

Shut up, Hornet read the Birthday

Reviewer: Horny Hornet Anonymous starstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 16, 2005 5:03 PM Title: Ch 6

eew it needs some sex

Author's Response: Two things: First, grow up. Second, don't leave a review unless it is constructive...or actually PERTAINS to the story

Reviewer: Ademi Princess Anonymous starstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 16, 2005 5:00 PM Title: Ch 1

I'm reading this ch by ch HELP ZELDA LINK!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Er...Zelda does not appear anywhere in this story until the VERY end...

Reviewer: Burn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 05, 2005 12:21 AM Title: Ch 1

8 stars just dosn't give this story it's proper justice... It was very descriptive with an interesting and origianal plot (damn how do I spell that >.

Reviewer: Red Sparrow Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2005 8:05 PM Title: Ch 1

Great story, its sometimes confusing, but I run into the same problems with my stories, so I'm not gonna be so hard on the reviews! 8/10 ^_^

Reviewer: EliteWarrior Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 11, 2005 3:55 PM Title: Ch 2

A pretty interesting story. Though the grammar and dialogue is a bit out-of-place here and there, the majority is fantastic, and the plot, so far, seems very original and creative. An eight out a' ten.

Reviewer: Quite_Gone_Jim Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2005 2:14 AM Title: Ch 1

I agree with the Mysterious Stranger, very well written, though a few bits are a bit chunky. You should read through it and try to smoothen it out a bit, but other than that its great. It has a whole feel about it that says its going to be big and exciting. 10/10.

Reviewer: The Mysterious Stranger Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2005 12:07 AM Title: Ch 1

This story is excellent, well written, and clearly has a clever plot in mind. I look forward to the rest of the story with much eagerness. 10/10.



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