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Reviews For A Kokiri Tale
Reviewer: Quite_Gone_Jim Signed
  [Report This]Date: Jan 26, 2005 3:40 AM Title: Kokiri Tale A very good effort at a story, the whole story idea was very well though of, but the writting was a bit off. You kept on confusing your past and present tenses, constanly swapping tense every few sentences. It was very clever and sweet, you have good ideas so keep on working on them and your writing and I'm sure you'll write one hell of a story one day. 7/10.
Reviewer: Burn Signed
[Report This]Date: Jan 25, 2005 11:23 AM Title: Kokiri Tale Wow, you're getting better. I particularly liked the ending,
Reviewer: Dark Skell Angel Signed
[Report This]Date: Jan 16, 2005 10:19 PM Title: Kokiri Tale I really enjoyed this story, though their was a few grammar mistakes at the begining, this story was nicely done and put togeter. Good job :P
Reviewer: Dark Skell Angel Signed
[Report This]Date: Jan 16, 2005 10:19 PM Title: Kokiri Tale I really enjoyed this story, though their was a few grammar mistakes at the begining, this story was nicely done and put togeter. Good job :P
Reviewer: Hyperlink Signed
[Report This]Date: Jan 12, 2005 11:24 PM Title: Kokiri Tale Nice little story here, it really shows the feelings between this two characters. And the ending was a great idea, tinged with emotion. Well done, keep it up! |
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