Post Your Own Work

 New Fan Works  Old Fan Works  Zelda Series  Multimedia  Features  Interactive  Site Info
Reviews For The Birthday
Reviewer: slut Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2007 6:06 PM Title: Chapter All

loved! fukin loved

Reviewer: DarkBlade Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2007 6:22 PM Title: Chapter All

well written.

Reviewer: Greatlkjllkjpol Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2007 6:13 PM Title: Chapter All

loved it alot

Reviewer: Chikita Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2007 6:09 PM Title: Chapter All

Great

Reviewer: Moon_Flower_Chikita Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2007 8:55 PM Title: Chapter All

Wow. O_o. Pretty damn good. ^.^

 

~Chikita~

Reviewer: mithos Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2007 9:06 AM Title: Chapter All

Well I'm glad that everyone is pleased with this story. I'll have you know that I'm an excellent writer, but I thought that I'd just write a story or two about sex because I feel that some of the ones that appear on this site are missing a storyline.

Maybe I'll write something a little more serious in the future.

Reviewer: Lone Soldier Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2005 8:42 PM Title: Chapter All

*REALLY SHOCKED* That is the most...how do I say this. Uh, that was the most hardcore sex I have EVVVVVEEEERRRRRR read. MY GOD ALMIGHTY!!!!!!!!!!!SCARY!

Reviewer: von Rhettenstien Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 12, 2005 6:02 PM Title: Chapter All

Dang i still cant laughing! Oh my side hurts.

Reviewer: von Rhettenstien Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 12, 2005 5:59 PM Title: Chapter All

Im going with Burn here. Wow!!!!! I think link may be how do i say this.... uhhh yeah i think links gonna need at least 48 hours of sleep just to have the strength tho sit up in bed. pretty good writing style you should write something more serious.

Reviewer: SomeKid614 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 01, 2005 3:57 PM Title: Chapter All

woa wtf??? its kinda like the story the way they'd do it in fan fiction F-L

Reviewer: anonamys Anonymous half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2005 10:51 PM Title: Chapter All

hey sara if u want to know read the story

Reviewer: inferno epona Signed star [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2005 8:21 PM Title: Chapter All

Look that is just wrong! First of all, Saria is like only 10 years of age. I don't think a girl of that age would do anything like that. I do like the style of your writing but, try and think of another style of writing besides sex. Second i really don't think Malon,Zelda and Saria would just strip straight away to have sex. God oh mighty!!

Reviewer: advancedgamer14 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 03, 2005 10:12 PM Title: Chapter All

not bad,

Reviewer: (the real not my idiotic bro)Horny Hornet Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2005 10:33 AM Title: Chapter All

OK THATS IT IM SOOOO GONNA KILL KYLE FOR THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!HE FRAMED MEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Red Sparrow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2005 9:49 AM Title: Chapter All

*Blinks* ...whoa...First off, you've got your anatomy terms switched around...I won't tell you what, though. Secondly, Hornet, STFU. And lastly, I checked this story simply because there was hype about it....HYPE. I mean, whoa, a fanfic actually getting hyped. *looks at Burn*



Enter the security code shown below:
 Sections
The "Post Your Own Work" section is powered by eFiction. To get it for your site, go to www.efiction.org.