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Reviews For The Birthday
Reviewer: Sara Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 17, 2005 3:36 PM Title: Chapter All

umm......I'm 10..........and.....uh.....my b-days on Sat........

Reviewer: RavenTay Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 17, 2005 2:36 PM Title: Chapter All

Okay, lemme just say that I could only take the first part of the fic and was disgusted by the rest -even though I didn't look at the rest- Alright! The writing was good though... You should write a fic that isn't a sex fic... And Sara, just how old are you... Because if you are under ten, then I don't think you should be asking that... >_>

Reviewer: Horny Hornet Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 16, 2005 5:30 PM Title: Chapter All

oh,and Im not kidding.I want a brown headed girl with weist length hair,blue eyes,white skin,hairy vagina and big tits.Got it?Remember,you send a pic of you,i send a pic of me.

Reviewer: Horny Hornet Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 16, 2005 5:28 PM Title: Chapter All

who wants to have sex with me?If you do,send me a pic of you totally nude(with the vagina)and send it to me.My e-mail is martymathews@hotmai;.net.Im a boy,im 19 and I want some excitment!Oh,and if you send me ill send you.

Reviewer: Sara Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 13, 2005 6:12 PM Title: Chapter All

umm...when I saw the "this material may not be suitable for young children" sign,I didnt read it soooooooo I have one question:What is sex and why do people strip themselves and go under the covers?What are they doing or do I want to know?

Reviewer: Alexandra Chick Anonymous starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 13, 2005 9:36 AM Title: Chapter All

*SHOCKED*.................eew.I-I-I-I d-d-ont f-feeal w-w-well.......*imagines sex and shudders*

Reviewer: Y2J Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 12, 2005 9:05 PM Title: Chapter All

Nice story. Too bad the viewers didn't get to see Link's strong PimpHand.

Reviewer: pikachugirl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 12, 2005 11:39 AM Title: Chapter All

..............eew.

Reviewer: Burn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 10, 2005 10:10 PM Title: Chapter All

heheheheheh

Reviewer: Burn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 10, 2005 10:10 PM Title: Chapter All

eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Reviewer: Burn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 10, 2005 12:13 AM Title: Chapter All

uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Reviewer: Incognito Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 09, 2005 6:05 PM Title: Chapter All

*SHOCKED*



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