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Reviewer: EliteWarrior Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 14, 2005 8:51 PM Title: Intro

I liked it, a lot. It's not my favorite, but I'm still intended to give you a ten since there was essentially nothing wrong with it, other than my personal tastes. I would like to hear a bit less...depressing tales from you? I'm all in for dark Zelda fiction, but meh, alot of blood and guts is starting to make my stomach turn....

Author's Response: Well, just hang in there a bit...it gets pretty funny/lighthearted later on...just wait a bit longer. I can't tell you how, but it'll lighten up, I'm just trying to get it to the light hearted parts before I snap from depression...you know, since I can't rush these things.

Reviewer: Hyperlink Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2005 6:46 PM Title: Intro

This is going great so far, I don't get why you have so few reviews... anyways, its an interesting touch adding a new cast of characters for the protagonists, with lots of twist. Its not as sadf though, but maybe thats a good thing, for you anyways, writing to much of that could get depressing. Anyways great job, keep it coming!

Author's Response: Yeah, I have to admit, trying my best to make the depressing parts really really depressing is getting to me, lol. thanx for the review, it's good to know theres someone out there who likes my stories ^_^

Reviewer: RavenTay Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2005 7:49 AM Title: Intro

This story is sooooo coool!!!!!! You have to keep writing! This story has so much suspense and darkness. At some parts I couldn't really understand what was going on, you know, with the Voices Chapter, but I can sorta understand it. Anyway its really interesting. O.O

Author's Response: Thanks! Finally, someone reviewed -_-;; And that 'voices' chapter was supposed to confuse you, so no worries, lol. But, it'll become really clear after a bit.



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