Reviewer: RavenTay
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Date: Apr 28, 2005 4:06 PM
Title: Prologue: A Plea From The Sages.
Okay... I have one big piece of advice for you... Some stories that don't have a lot of action, or is just people conversing, is perfect for play writing, but a story like yours, which I can see is an action/adventure fic is much better written in regular story format... I'm telling you this because after a while, I have no idea what Link, Zelda, and Ganondorf are doing... Oh and is Ganondorf supposed to be on Link and Zelda's side?