Reviewer: Red Sparrow
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Date: May 03, 2005 12:12 AM
Title: 5
I tried reading the story, but it was just too frustrating because of the lack of paragraphs and commas. I just couldn't finish it. Try updating/fixing it, but use a word processor next time, it helps--A lot.
Hope that helps. 7/10.
