Reviewer: Sir Nicholas Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2005 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

wow...teh Gash is a very good writer, grammar was flawless, good vocab too. story was nice, u made an old topic seem new by adding different elements, very good first chapter my friend

Author's Response: Thanks my friend, BADGER BADGER BADGER MUSHROOM MUSHROOM!

Reviewer: Burn Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2005 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

Not bad. Good use of a widly used concept. I'll go ahead and give you a ten.

Author's Response: Thank you very much :).