As of now, I've only read chapter one. I think that it jumped into action very quickly, which is good; except that it may be a little too quickly. I'll keep reading, but I think that, so far, things could be drawn out more. Also, there is no real face to the enemy at this point; it's just a herd of monsters. One more thing, make sure you put as much depth as possible into your own characters.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I have so many ideas rushing through my head, I have to speed things up to get to the big plot elements. I'll try to draw things out, but I can't promise anything. About the 'face of the enemy' part, your not supposed to know who is the enemy yet, but I have revealed quite a bit in my latest chapter. Finally, I will give more in-depth descriptions of each characters lives, though probably just for Maetho, General Matchtar and the unseen foe, since Link and Zelda's history is pretty well known. Thanks for the review, and please send in more if you have any more suggestions.