Reviewer: dekudiva Signed [
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Date: Apr 10, 2008 5:29 PM
Title: Chapter 1
I didn't like this one as much as the first...I think it could have been pulled out a lot more. There were many things that were badly explained/rushed through(particularly the Link/Impa thing). Much of this didn't make as much sense as it could have...and you need to work on your grammer/punctuation. In any case, I'll definitely read the next installation.
Author's Response:
yeah im not as happy with the way this one turned out lol dreams was better
the third will be a while though im afraid