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Reviewer: MadSkillz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 23, 2011 6:31 PM Title: Welcome to Kakariko

Nice! Yeah you used Finn better than I would've!
Overrall great story man. :D
Update some more!

Author's Response: I have, Finn was fun using in the third chapter. Especially in the fights. Sorry I made him lose, but I thought if Beat won the prize it would make the story more interesting.

Reviewer: MadSkillz Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 23, 2011 11:54 AM Title: Welcome to Kakariko

Ah, okay. Just next get the chapter up quickly! :D

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Date: Jul 23, 2011 7:29 AM Title: Welcome to Kakariko

Nice story. Requiem of love basically said it all for me except WHERE THE HELL IS FINN??????!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I am introducing him in the next chapter. I just needed a little details about him. I also know what to make his wish.

Reviewer: Requiem_of_Love Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 23, 2011 12:17 AM Title: Welcome to Kakariko

I Like how you smoothly transition in between the places. very well written! P.S I didn't know normal ppl could lock lips with a fairy. 10/10

Author's Response: It is possible. You just have to be carful. The fairy may suffocate. I'm Gonna warn you, don't try using tongue when kissing one, I drowned mine by doing that. Why tinkerbell? Why?



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