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Reviews For The Black Rock
Reviewer: jordash Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2012 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 1: kindol town

Its a good story line, belive me. But I found a lot, and I mean a lot of things I could correct. If you get help with spelling and grammar, it might be a little better. ;D

Author's Response: thanks for telling me :) i was half asleep when i wrote this ..... i am fixing it now :P

Reviewer: zeldalover Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2012 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 1: kindol town

why did you put navi in it

Author's Response: i was just asking myself the same thing

Reviewer: skullkid56 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2012 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 1: kindol town

nice

Author's Response: thanks for the 5 stars

Reviewer: MM27 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 15, 2012 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 2: room 5

wow it just gets better and better

Author's Response: well that is good that it is not getting worse

Reviewer: MM27 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 14, 2012 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 1: kindol town

10 out of 10 i hope it will be done soon



Author's Response: me too

Reviewer: bob5 Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 13, 2012 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 1: kindol town

good but it is too smal



Author's Response: well i just added more so i hope you like it :)



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