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Reviews For The Black Rock
Reviewer: jordash Signed
![]() ![]() Date: Jul 15, 2012 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 1: kindol town Its a good story line, belive me. But I found a lot, and I mean a lot of things I could correct. If you get help with spelling and grammar, it might be a little better. ;D
Reviewer: zeldalover Anonymous
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: Apr 16, 2012 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 1: kindol town why did you put navi in it
Reviewer: skullkid56 Anonymous
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: Apr 16, 2012 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 1: kindol town nice
Reviewer: MM27 Signed
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: Apr 15, 2012 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 2: room 5 wow it just gets better and better
Reviewer: MM27 Signed
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: Apr 14, 2012 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 1: kindol town 10 out of 10 i hope it will be done soon Author's Response: me too
Reviewer: bob5 Anonymous
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: Apr 13, 2012 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 1: kindol town good but it is too smal Author's Response: well i just added more so i hope you like it :) |
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