Reviewer: Dog soldier Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2005 4:50 AM Title: Intamacy.

quality story , how does a hottub in Hyrule work?

Author's Response: Read QGJ's reply

Reviewer: The Fierce Deity Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 05, 2005 2:48 AM Title: The Conciquinces of Betrayal

LINK DISGRACER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Read the new one, Link's not nearly such a jackass.

Reviewer: Navi24 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Feb 14, 2005 7:00 PM Title: The Red Haired Girl

wow.....why would I not like this you desirve 5 stars good job

Reviewer: Moo Cow Nation Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2004 1:28 PM Title: The Red Haired Girl

I noticed that you said that you were going to redo this. I thought this was a great story! It was very sweet. Why would you change it?

Author's Response: Well, I read my story, and felt dissapointed. Gentle Rain had alot of potential, and I wasted it all. It was originally meant to be a story about one persons outlook on life, and the things that keep her alive in the hell she faces. I turned out to be a story about a jackass with no brain snapping into reality.

Reviewer: Gash Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Oct 04, 2004 6:19 PM Title: The Red Haired Girl

I don't really like it you have some potential but it's untapted Malon and Link where thought of to be a central focus and Garra is from the Naruto comic strip (bad ass chrachter though) I hated it so I'm going to stop now you could have done better my friend

Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: Burn Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 26, 2004 2:42 AM Title: The Red Haired Girl

Now we get to the exciting part I was talking about. Look for the ending in about a month or two.

Author's Response: WTF? I only meant to drop one of these. . .

Reviewer: The Mysterious Stranger Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2004 12:27 AM Title: The Red Haired Girl

Well, by my standards this isn't a very good story. The plot is very scarce and lacks some detail. It doesn't exlplain how Link went from Malon to Zelda, it just happened out of the blue. There is no indepth description of characters that gives them a certain personality. It was unnessesary for the other "fierce" guard to enter the story as you killed him off as fast as he appeared. I'm sorry to say, but I did not like this story so I will give it a five. PS this is not meant to offend you, it is just my opinion and is not ment to be believed.

Author's Response: You havn't gotten into the plot yet. SPOILER: Gaara isn't dead. He's going to come back, and will be a major charecter. This isn't just a romance story either. The plot is coming. Soon, this story will be a lot more exciting. JUst wait.