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Reviews For Approaching Darkness
Reviewer: LHOA Anonymous
 [Report This]Date: Sep 05, 2005 10:25 PM Title: Only the Beginning THIS HAS GOT TO BE ONE OF THE BEST STORYS i'VE EVER READ!!! AWESOME CARACTERS. CAN'T WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTERS.
Reviewer: xrigidxdistancex Anonymous
[Report This]Date: Jul 29, 2005 12:14 AM Title: The Breaking of Innocence Well, you had alot of typos in this chapter, so I'd say go ahead and fix those up, but otherwise I can't really think of anything that you could improve ._. -shrugs- I LOVED THIS CHAPTER THOUGH, HOLY CRAPINESS OF THE FLYING MONKEY WHORES! -runs around in circles-
Reviewer: xrigidxdistancex Signed
[Report This]Date: Jul 01, 2005 12:24 PM Title: Dinolfos Nyaaa! Laura-sama does it again! -waves flags- -^^- That was awsome ._. and I liked when all the bones and junk were showing. It was like bushwaam! XD -claps- Ah, I think you know my answeres to these questions, but the bird tattoo intruiges me -pulls at invisible gotey- -^^-
Reviewer: RavenTay Anonymous
[Report This]Date: Jun 05, 2005 9:05 PM Title: Only the Beginning Ah, well since you asked, I'll answer your questions... 1. This story is becoming more interesting by every chapter. I love the whole darkened feel to every scene and how Link and Dark link have switched roles. I think that answers the first and second questions. 3. I'm sure u get this a lot but I like Suto and how the adorable little black boe is Dark Link's little sidekick. I also noticed that Dark Link depends on Suto a lot to protect Sean and I wonder how powerful Suto is to have that much of Dark Link's trust. 4.I do enjoy the part where Sean fights back against Dark Link which makes me wonder how Sean suddenly seemed so evil. 5. yes absolutely 6. Yes this story is so amazing you have 2 write more!!! ^.^
Reviewer: Hyperlink Signed
[Report This]Date: Jun 05, 2005 4:31 PM Title: Only the Beginning Excellent, more mysteries! This is really progressing, and man was that a long chapter. Still great, not complaining!
1.) I think AP is doing really well so far. If this is halfway, I think its been structured well for its point. Everythings still mysterious, but still has time to be revealed.
2.) Of course about the plot! Just like my last comment.
3.) I kind of like Suto. The whole disillusioned and not so disillusioned prospect has always been interesting to me.
4.) I dunno, I kind of liked the meeting with Link the first time. Hard to say though, its been awhile since Ive read most of it.
5.) Of course! Id been insane not to! Plots like this have interesting historys.
6.) Sequels are only needed if something is determinedly inconclusive. If the plot gets done, there is no real need, unless you simply feel like adding to it. But if not, there wouldn't be a real need.
So I'm lazy and just copied the answers from FF.net, they're still honest and my opinion. Great work, hope to see more soon!
Reviewer: EliteWarrior Signed
[Report This]Date: Jun 05, 2005 12:27 PM Title: Only the Beginning Ooh, I love essays! :P
1) I find this story very well written. It makes sure that detail isn't boring, and it just makes you want to keep reading.
2) Oh god, do you even have to ask this? The plotline is amazing. Although the idea of Link becoming evil has been done before, this story doesn't quite make it happen like the usual. It adds a wonderful blend of life to the characters and well-made emotion.
3. I enjoy Suto's character. I'm not a fan of Dark Link, I'll admit, as I think he's a tad bit too overrated. But anyway, I love the innocence and child-like behavior of Suto, and how he still loves his father.
4. Like above, I love the parts involving Link and Suto. I enjoyed the explanation of how you control beasts, and I think it's kind of cute how Link cares for his son.
5. I would love a prequal. However, I don't want you to lose interest in writing it, and I'm not sure how it could be written as well as this story.
6. I'll be honest, I don't think so. I would rather wait for the ending to give a full reasoning. If it lets off as a cliff-hanger, then I'd go for it. However, if everything ends happily and stuff at the end, then a sequal would most likely ruin the emotion of this Fic', and turn it into a long-running whore-fiction. I much rather have you write a new story *Nods*.
Reviewer: Hyperlink Anonymous
[Report This]Date: May 21, 2005 10:08 PM Title: Only the Beginning Heheh, Thade's awesome, wonder what'll happen next? Great work, keep it up!
Reviewer: EliteWarrior Anonymous
[Report This]Date: May 03, 2005 10:47 PM Title: Only the Beginning Awesome. I love your stories ^_^ . Keep writing. Although, even though I have nothing against it, your stories are getting sweeter and less violent. Not that that's wrong or anything, just to let you know if you didn't know...Ack, I'm confusing myself! Anyway, ten/ten. Keep up the good work, your writing's still good.
Reviewer: Hyperlink Signed
[Report This]Date: May 03, 2005 7:28 PM Title: Only the Beginning Great chapter, I'm a bit lost of how you found it so comtemptable top write, but then Im having the same problem with mine too. No biggy, worth still the wait. Hope to see more soon!
Reviewer: Hyperlink Signed
[Report This]Date: Mar 26, 2005 4:03 PM Title: Only the Beginning Another interesting chapter with more interesting characters... haha, the nostalgia... oh and I really like how you added the superstitions of the godesses into it, it added a bit more culture and atmosphere into it. Anyways, great work!
Reviewer: EliteWarrior Anonymous
[Report This]Date: Feb 28, 2005 10:49 PM Title: Only the Beginning Like...wow. Amazing, brilliant, can't be done better. In all honesty, this story deserves five stars. There is NOTHING wrong with it that is major. In the entirely long story, I only found ONE mispelled word (It was "though", when you ment "through"). The writing is pure brilliance, the storyline kills everything, the character are truly a sight to behold, and the atmosphere, feelings, and attitudes of the characters are that of a writing pro. To anyone that didn't give this a ten, shame on you. It is one of..oh hell, it is the best written story on kasuto.net. YOU, are my role model now, congrats.
Reviewer: Hyperlink Signed
[Report This]Date: Feb 28, 2005 9:18 PM Title: Only the Beginning I can't believe I hadn't read this yet! This is a really interesting story; its really kind of surprising, I dont think anyone else has done a dark Link oriantated story, if someone did, I didnt mean to offend them in my ignorance. I look forward to all it's updates! Great job!
Reviewer: xrigidxdistancex Signed
[Report This]Date: Feb 22, 2005 8:21 PM Title: Molgera Could Volvagia be dead? Aw T.T That'd just suck for Link, wouldn't it? Ani: Yes it would No one asked you, shoo
Reviewer: xrigidxdistancex Signed
[Report This]Date: Feb 22, 2005 8:20 PM Title: Woodfall Ani: Ok, this time I've locked Ang up. -^^-', I just wanted to say DL BETTER RESCUE ME FROM HER, SHE'S CRAZY! DX Ang: -muffled from closet- We have the same mind!!! Ani: ¬.¬ ....ignore that... it's just my... plant
Reviewer: xrigidxdistancex Signed
[Report This]Date: Feb 22, 2005 8:19 PM Title: White Hair -cackles insanely- God knows how many stars you'll have by the end of my review rampage XD wonderfulness! T.T So much better than me... XD BUT THAT'S OK! |
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