Reviewer: The Mysterious Stranget Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2004 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

Well, I only read a few lines of the story and I can already tell that the author has no intrest in it. The grammar and spelling was awful, did you read through your story before posting it? I suggest you do next time. Please, if you are going to write a story, be serious about it and try to think what a proffesional author might use to describe scenes and such. It is no good just stringing a whole bunch of words together, you need to plan and make sure of whats going to happen. Thats all I can say. Goodbye.