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Reviewer: Spooky Ghost Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2005 1:19 PM Title: Prologue

umm....(ghosts arn't suppossed to say umm.....please exuce that)*evil red eyed glare*umm....(there I go again!)I....(arg!)

Reviewer: Quite_Gone_Jim Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 12, 2005 2:55 AM Title: Prologue

Its pretty good. Spooky too. However, your writing could use some work. Try to make it flow better and a bit more intense. 8/10.

Reviewer: Burn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 29, 2005 1:10 PM Title: Prologue

Much better, now that you fixed it.

Author's Response: TY

Reviewer: Burn Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 25, 2005 11:10 AM Title: Prologue

While it was still rushed, alot of begining authors do that... and I kind of liked the storyline.

Author's Response: Thanx for the critique i'm fixing it as I type i'll make sure to take in a few of your stories ;)



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